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Just try to imgaine it is set outside...

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:iconrafman:
Nice shot, but I hope don't mind me saying it could do with cropping down. :)

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Photonig and me, old buggers wearing out disgracefully
:iconjazzimini:
Ok cool thanks will do that!
:iconrafman:
Try cropping to within the umbrella to miss off stuff behind after all it is the friends who are important. :D

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Photonig and me, old buggers wearing out disgracefully
:iconjazzimini:
Will do thank you for the tip :)
:iconrafman:
hope it helps send me link when u done :D

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Photonig and me, old buggers wearing out disgracefully
:iconrafman:
I think it looks much better but your thoughts are the more important ones as only you know what you were trying to say with it.

Next..try to get rid of art on the wall behind the umbrella, the red picture especially draws the eye away from the subjects. Hope this helps.

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Photonig and me, old buggers wearing out disgracefully
:iconjazzimini:
Thanks for that...I'll look out for distracting things next time :)
:iconscurge-lonely-dragon:
Why not just go outside?!? :O =D

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Every cloud has a silver lining...which makes them kinda heavy, and that's why 2,500 of the damn things crash every year! :yum: :XD:
:iconjazzimini:
It was cold, raining & windy...plus the pictures were for my friends art project

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Mar 27, 2008, 11:32:27 PM

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